Great job!
o7
some remarks:
It's better to use the most recent versions of the maps (those for L3M and M5M), they contain a bit more of info, including reference numbers for the objects. Also occasional errors can be corrected.
I draw my own routes for DAP runs not always to optimize time, but taking into account some "educational" part - for L3M this is the difference in minimum approach disctances, in particular from the west (left) side of the settlement.
For M5M - some points to scan on you route will be beneath the srv level - not really handy. I'm trying to do them in "simplistic" way (and if possible from the "ground level" in case of significant gravity). Also there is a variation of the route where you will not be obliged to climb anywhere at all.
Added:
PS: If you are searching for commanders Haps or DrFreez (about their sites) most likely they can be found on the EGU public discord channel.
In that case, let me redraw the second one, as there are two points below and I didn't actually test if they are scannable, which they probably are not. When I did the route, I went down after the 4th data point and got them.
The first one (science) is tried and tested as being easy, and efficient.