Hehe, can't give you rep, but bravo!
Oh, and the fight for Tommy starts here:
Intervention
*clank*
The sound reverberated through the cabin as the unidentified ship locked onto the hull, and was quickly followed by the harsh sounds of a mining laser as the unknown assailants began to cut through the thick metal skin of Tommy’s ship.
Tommy could feel the fear run down the inside of his leg, and smell the apprehension as it puddled beneath his reinforced chair. He had to do something, he had to move.
Too late. The sounds had stopped.
*Krrrsshhhhhh*
A familiar face popped round the doorway, “Hey Bruv, let’s get you home” said his sister with a smile.