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Sir.Tj

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As we are waxing lyrical.

A attempt at a haiku.

Kow sits at the screen

Mouth agape, starts to drivel

Then mangles the drabbles.

Gawd knows if it's right though.
 

Sir.Tj

The Moderator who shall not be Blamed....
Volunteer Moderator
I see you driving
round town with the girl I love,
and I’m like: haiku.

Good one :) Shame your grammar in the rest of the message seems to have been affected by its content :)

"A attempt" :eek:

I look forward to your next drabble :)


The only response that can be given is.


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Is it just my imagination, or do I sense a new, "Drabblers' Club Haiku" thread being born???


I feel a new start
A challenge to group few words
Making a Haiku


;)
 
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Here is a wee bonus drabble (based on a popular joke) for those awaiting the next dockers:

I call it: Boils Spoils


Susans agent called her as soon as he heard the TV advert.
"Ideal for me?" Susan barked.
"Yes, its a new show looking for people to take part"
"Whats it about? " Susan grunted.
"I don't know, I had to get hold of you asap so it's just telling us now." an akward pause "Never mind"
"What?" Susan said sounding like a hippo farting into the opening of Winnards Hole.
"I heard them wrong. I am so sorry for troubling you." and he hung up.
Susan stared at the TV (and concurrently the ceiling).
NEW TV SHOW NEEDS PEOPLE: Fact Hunt.
 
Hehe, can't give you rep, but bravo!

Oh, and the fight for Tommy starts here:

Intervention

*clank*

The sound reverberated through the cabin as the unidentified ship locked onto the hull, and was quickly followed by the harsh sounds of a mining laser as the unknown assailants began to cut through the thick metal skin of Tommy’s ship.
Tommy could feel the fear run down the inside of his leg, and smell the apprehension as it puddled beneath his reinforced chair. He had to do something, he had to move.

Too late. The sounds had stopped.

*Krrrsshhhhhh*

A familiar face popped round the doorway, “Hey Bruv, let’s get you home” said his sister with a smile.
 
I did warn you.

Tammy

Although she was smiling, Tammy was filled with pain. The sight of her brother, soiled with his own fear, as naked as the day he was born, huge beyond all belief quickly dispelled the elation she had felt when she had found his ship.
Only 3 years had passed since Tommy had eaten that infected burger, since he had become infected with that horrible disease that had caused him to lose all rationality, all self-control.

“Ready the servo-lifts” she sub-vocalised to her ship’s computer. “Let’s get him on-board and safe before we start the real mission” she thought.


Finding Simoof.
 
I did warn you.

Tammy

Although she was smiling, Tammy was filled with pain. The sight of her brother, soiled with his own fear, as naked as the day he was born, huge beyond all belief quickly dispelled the elation she had felt when she had found his ship.
Only 3 years had passed since Tommy had eaten that infected burger, since he had become infected with that horrible disease that had caused him to lose all rationality, all self-control.

“Ready the servo-lifts” she sub-vocalised to her ship’s computer. “Let’s get him on-board and safe before we start the real mission” she thought.


Finding Simoof.
Well played. Tommy and Tammy appear to be out of harms way.

I wonder if Rose is aware of what Seamus is up to?
 
Cheers Telakin for fixing my flowing hair.

Does anyone else notice that unread personal messages here have an open envelope icon and read ones the envelope is closed? Thats confusing.


 
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