And here's the wheel, it isn't the greatest invention, but if you add it to another object, good times
.........isn't that the point.
Write a story, see how it feels to me, then test it out on others .. it is funny how some people like what I have written and some feel that it is all wrong, I guess writing is subjective (probably, obviously... damn, too many adverbs!)
I seriously (oh, there's another one ... Does this one count?) appreciate the comments, I really do.
they have helped me so much, maybe this story might make the grade ...
we will see, right now I need some 'Cheese on toast'