Mr Brookes, I like what you did with
the Thargoid storyline here.
By not referring to the Alliance, Turner, Argent, AAAI, the Quest ships, etc, this story is neither confirmed nor denied. We don't know if it happened, all that we think we "know" is just rumours, which may or may not be true, perhaps never to be revealed. I also like you painting the Alliance as "shifty", "dodgy" and generally not to be trusted, it's a nice counterbalance to us always considering them the goodie-two-shoes, and allows groups like SEPP, BC, etc to fulfill the role that the Alliance played in FFE.
Now if only I had time to get involved with the ED story. The absence of offline single player, and everything happening in real time, does make it difficult to really feel like one is involved, unlike FFE where the ability to come back a month later and not to have missed anything was great.