I like it! I have no problem with any of your changes. I don't know how GalNet usually formats their items for dates; in game it's 19 Feb 3301, so I wrote it that way, but then if they decide to use it they can format it correctly themselves.
As for it coming from the Sol Constitution Party, I leave that up to you. I've written it into the draft below, but if it's a part of the government he's basically issuing letters of mark to go after not just illegal slaves but, the way I wrote it, Imperial Slaves as well. Might be too bold a move to come straight from the source? To go more in depth than is needed for this particular article, Mr. Cantero may be astroturfing a more underground organization to work on that kind of thing. (Meanwhile if the Sol Constitution Party is not legally recognized, then by all means this makes total sense. But I get the sense they're trying to legitimize themselves.)
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March 2, 3301
Sol Constitution Party Calls for Slave Trade Disruption
The Sol Constitution Party has called for more active involvement on the part of private citizens in ending the galactic slave trade.
“In March 1807, two great nation-states on Earth passed into law acts that prohibited the international trading of slaves,” party leader Theodore Cantero said. “Fifteen hundred years later, the slave trade is still practiced in human space, and in a large number of systems is actually done so legally.
“This is a call to all commanders of strong moral fiber, those that cannot stand idly by while man is owned by man. This March, free every enslaved soul that you can. Then, do the same the next month. And the next.
“And do not stop until every man is free!”
This March is the 1,494th anniversary of the American 'Act Prohibiting Importation of Slaves' and the British 'Slave Trade Act 1807'.
-CMDR Boter
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I still trimmed a couple parts to try to fit in the 150 word limit. I took out the 2nd-25th timeframe from this draft - I liked your wording but it felt clunky to me in the paragraph. (If it were accepted as a true community goal, then that timeframe is awesome, but as just an article it felt odd to me.) I added it afterwards as the sort of thing a news article might place at the bottom for more information on the topic. I ran out of room, otherwise I'd add how SCP representatives showed up at a grassroots event honoring the birthday of American president Abraham Lincoln.
Also, if we want to make a new thread for further news/event planning, making one under the Sol Constitution Party totally makes sense, here or maybe in RP, not quite sure. Would just be nice to have a general thread instead of constantly necro'ing the Lincoln event thread.
I'm sorry, man, I think I confused things a bit

I was merely saying we make Mr. Cantero the speaker - we needn't point out that he's a member of the Sol Constitution party, or include the party itself in the event in any way. I mean, I'd like to RP that they'd be involved, honestly, but we only have a budget of 150 words per news item, as you've pointed out. I tend to think Mr. Cantero would be speaking purely as a private citizen, and as a member of the abolitionist movement in this context. Also, as FD has not picked up my news ideas, we could RP that the SCP is still going through their reorganization and such at this point, and as such, that Mr. Cantero has not been named the leader of the party yet.
As for the issue of the legality of what he's calling for, from a political standpoint, he's not necessarily calling for any illegal actions, per se. He's simply saying to liberate any slaves you come across. Slavery is illegal in the Federation anyways, and one can buy Imperial slaves and free them if one so desires, so there is no implicit exhortation to illegality here, to my mind. And commanders are basically given 'letters of marque' all the time in the game, when they're asked to be bounty hunters and such, so I feel the ED universe is pretty permissive in such ways.
Anyways, I think you should turn in the previous version, personally. I'd love for the SCP to be involved in this in some way, but I think it's best if the SCP
supported the abolitionist movement, as opposed to basically
being the abolitionist movement. That's my take, anyways
...Oh yeah, and per your advice, yeah, we might want to start a new, different thread on this topic, when it comes time. I do like the relative privacy of this defunct thread, though. Maybe we should take further planning into Private Message-land
