Hello fellow Commanders!
I am writing a small story from my pilot's perspective, with a few cameos and collaborative writing from other players that I interact with. I will be adding the entries in chapter format, and cover a few stories of what happens in game narratively. Hope you enjoy it. Comments and feedback welcome. I will try to index the chapters in a central post here so they're easy to find between comments.
Signed,
CMD Bzek
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After what had seemed hours of confinement in the small holding cell, enjoying the company of two small chairs that were right out of a chiropractor's nightmare and an aluminium table that was so minimalistic that it was almost artistic, someone finally came in to give him the good news.
"Count Bzek. You are in deep trouble." he said with a dry voice that sounded as though it had come out from pinched nostrils rather than from anyone's vocal cords.
The man walked toward the opposite side of the table and threw dataslate to slide towards Dominik's side. He stopped there, staring, in what had to be a rehearsed menacing pause. After he deemed it sufficiently suspenseful, he finally undid the buttons of his deep blue jacket to let it part over his shirt and tie he finally sit down. He remained silent, glaring across with what was surely meant to be chilling-to-the-bone menace. Dominik picked the dataslate and glanced over the glowing content for the best part of five seconds before dropping it back down on the table with a metallic clatter. It was full of information that meant nothing to him. Numbers, percents, and his name was at the top.
"So you're going to pay me for damages, right?" Dominik asked, reaching up with his finger and picking at a small scab that had formed where his cheekbone had struck the dash of his ship at the time of collision.
"The data you have in front of you is the results of your medical examination." he stated, rather than responding directly. He was without a doubt a bureaucrat of some shape or form. The boring cut of his dark jacket, impossibly tidy tie and neatly combed hairstyle said it clearly. This man cared nothing about flair.
"Yeah, exactly. Damages. I got a piece of plastic inside my nostril holding the shape of my nose in place. Literally." Dominik replied, figuring that the data he had been an assessment of how much they owed him. On top of the insurance payoff from his ship. He would be sitting in a very comfortable sum of credits soon enough. Maybe enough to retire. Not that he wanted to retire. He liked to think he was still to young for that.
"Your blood alcohol levels were 1.23. The doctors were actually surprised you were alive." the bureaucrat pushed his glasses up the ridge of his nose.
"So what? Alcohol is not illegal in Imperial space." Dominik snorted, shrugged, and slumped back against his chair.
"No, it is not. However, are you aware that the legal limit for flying under the influence of alcohol is 0.10?" the man arched his thin brow to a curve sharp enough that almost hid under his side-swept fringe.
Dominik was of course aware of it, but if the station's representative was being coy about getting to the point he figured he could respond in kind by being dense about it.
"So you're going to fine me? That's what this is all about? Alright, just dock your fees from whatever you owe me. No biggie. I want to stay in good terms with the fine people of Helin Terminal." Dominik pursed his lips, willing to at least concede that. He was aware that crashing an Anaconda against a station's wall at booster speed would case grievous damages to the station too. Not only to his nose.
"No. We informed the Pilot Federation of this, and they have agreed only to pay off the minimal bracket of six-hundred thousand credits. Needless to say you are not entitled to any compensation for damages to your own person. That was, entirely, your fault." he said it with such venomous satisfaction that it took everything for Dominik not to reach over and punch him in the face. Which he might have done, if his other hand wasn't cuffed to the chair.
Taking an Anaconda and loading it with near five hundred tons of gold to sell at that port. Which would have been a nice payoff, and enough to cover insurance, if he hadn't decided to start celebrating on board before he actually landed his new ship.
"The sum covers part of the damages, your savings and the Commander you contacted was able to cover the difference, but I am afraid that is as much as it will pay for. The good news are... as you are not in debt you won't have to sell yourself into slavery to stay financially afloat. Congratulations."
I am writing a small story from my pilot's perspective, with a few cameos and collaborative writing from other players that I interact with. I will be adding the entries in chapter format, and cover a few stories of what happens in game narratively. Hope you enjoy it. Comments and feedback welcome. I will try to index the chapters in a central post here so they're easy to find between comments.
Signed,
CMD Bzek
----
After what had seemed hours of confinement in the small holding cell, enjoying the company of two small chairs that were right out of a chiropractor's nightmare and an aluminium table that was so minimalistic that it was almost artistic, someone finally came in to give him the good news.
"Count Bzek. You are in deep trouble." he said with a dry voice that sounded as though it had come out from pinched nostrils rather than from anyone's vocal cords.
The man walked toward the opposite side of the table and threw dataslate to slide towards Dominik's side. He stopped there, staring, in what had to be a rehearsed menacing pause. After he deemed it sufficiently suspenseful, he finally undid the buttons of his deep blue jacket to let it part over his shirt and tie he finally sit down. He remained silent, glaring across with what was surely meant to be chilling-to-the-bone menace. Dominik picked the dataslate and glanced over the glowing content for the best part of five seconds before dropping it back down on the table with a metallic clatter. It was full of information that meant nothing to him. Numbers, percents, and his name was at the top.
"So you're going to pay me for damages, right?" Dominik asked, reaching up with his finger and picking at a small scab that had formed where his cheekbone had struck the dash of his ship at the time of collision.
"The data you have in front of you is the results of your medical examination." he stated, rather than responding directly. He was without a doubt a bureaucrat of some shape or form. The boring cut of his dark jacket, impossibly tidy tie and neatly combed hairstyle said it clearly. This man cared nothing about flair.
"Yeah, exactly. Damages. I got a piece of plastic inside my nostril holding the shape of my nose in place. Literally." Dominik replied, figuring that the data he had been an assessment of how much they owed him. On top of the insurance payoff from his ship. He would be sitting in a very comfortable sum of credits soon enough. Maybe enough to retire. Not that he wanted to retire. He liked to think he was still to young for that.
"Your blood alcohol levels were 1.23. The doctors were actually surprised you were alive." the bureaucrat pushed his glasses up the ridge of his nose.
"So what? Alcohol is not illegal in Imperial space." Dominik snorted, shrugged, and slumped back against his chair.
"No, it is not. However, are you aware that the legal limit for flying under the influence of alcohol is 0.10?" the man arched his thin brow to a curve sharp enough that almost hid under his side-swept fringe.
Dominik was of course aware of it, but if the station's representative was being coy about getting to the point he figured he could respond in kind by being dense about it.
"So you're going to fine me? That's what this is all about? Alright, just dock your fees from whatever you owe me. No biggie. I want to stay in good terms with the fine people of Helin Terminal." Dominik pursed his lips, willing to at least concede that. He was aware that crashing an Anaconda against a station's wall at booster speed would case grievous damages to the station too. Not only to his nose.
"No. We informed the Pilot Federation of this, and they have agreed only to pay off the minimal bracket of six-hundred thousand credits. Needless to say you are not entitled to any compensation for damages to your own person. That was, entirely, your fault." he said it with such venomous satisfaction that it took everything for Dominik not to reach over and punch him in the face. Which he might have done, if his other hand wasn't cuffed to the chair.
Taking an Anaconda and loading it with near five hundred tons of gold to sell at that port. Which would have been a nice payoff, and enough to cover insurance, if he hadn't decided to start celebrating on board before he actually landed his new ship.
"The sum covers part of the damages, your savings and the Commander you contacted was able to cover the difference, but I am afraid that is as much as it will pay for. The good news are... as you are not in debt you won't have to sell yourself into slavery to stay financially afloat. Congratulations."
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