HELP NEEDED TO MAKE A SERIES!!

[Jesse30]

I just had an idea last night and I would like to make it into series of episodes which I would think would be entertaining to the audience. I just did my first episode and I would help from the community to get give more ideas or suggestions to give my story more character and dilemma. I have more ideas in mind but I want hear other suggestions on what could I improve or add to my story. I am trying to create a Bad Boys series starring The Code as the bad guys, or whoever is out there that are the meanest and notorious gang in space. Additionally, I would like to request the help from the good guys as well who wants be part of it. Please drop a comment below if you have an idea that you would like to share with the rest of us? I already planning to make the videos shorter because I feel is too long.

[video=youtube;WffoLqWRpYc]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WffoLqWRpYc[/video]

 

[PulsarShark]

This did seem kinda long and surprisingly uneventful despite the combat. I'm not sure exactly what you're going for, but you made me think of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MxHbO1MHXuI . Which is pretty funny. What do you think of doing some scripting, getting a couple of people to voice repeat characters, and playing up the COPS parody angle? You could have a lot of fun and get some good following with that, I'd bet.

Just off the top of my head... system security officers respond to a domestic dispute where an angry wife caught her man watching something dirty on the new holo-vision setup and threw him off the family Anaconda (onto the Sidewinder lifeboat) in the middle of deep space. His distress signal brought the cops, he's trying to talk his wife into letting him back on the ship, but everything he says makes her angrier, and she starts ejecting his stuff out the cargo hatch (Consumer Tech, Clothing, Beer) but she doesn't Abandon it so the cops have to warn him he will be fined for picking it up. You take it from here

 

[Jesse30]

This did seem kinda long and surprisingly uneventful despite the combat. I'm not sure exactly what you're going for, but you made me think of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MxHbO1MHXuI . Which is pretty funny. What do you think of doing some scripting, getting a couple of people to voice repeat characters, and playing up the COPS parody angle? You could have a lot of fun and get some good following with that, I'd bet.

Just off the top of my head... system security officers respond to a domestic dispute where an angry wife caught her man watching something dirty on the new holo-vision setup and threw him off the family Anaconda (onto the Sidewinder lifeboat) in the middle of deep space. His distress signal brought the cops, he's trying to talk his wife into letting him back on the ship, but everything he says makes her angrier, and she starts ejecting his stuff out the cargo hatch (Consumer Tech, Clothing, Beer) but she doesn't Abandon it so the cops have to warn him he will be fined for picking it up. You take it from here

Thank you mate for giving me great ideas, that is what I am looking for positive feedback.