I find action scenes difficult to write.
I can write all day about people having a face-to-face conversation, probably because I like to pick up on the nuances of conversation in real-life, it makes it easy and more interesting for me to put them into writing.
But my first-hand experience of "action" ends in paintballing and video-games! I often have to do a lot of research and reading of other material to get a feel for it.
You did a good job here Xek, I could picture what was going on in my mind quite clearly.
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I find action scenes difficult to write.
I can write all day about people having a face-to-face conversation, probably because I like to pick up on the nuances of conversation in real-life, it makes it easy and more interesting for me to put them into writing.
But my first-hand experience of "action" ends in paintballing and video-games! I often have to do a lot of research and reading of other material to get a feel for it.
You did a good job here Xek, I could picture what was going on in my mind quite clearly.
Rep is still on cooldown so have a virtual +1![]()
You know how sometimes you work really hard, weeks sometimes, to make something good? You redo it again and again to get it just right? Then you post it once you're happy, only to find several other people do the same thing as you way better?
You sir, And Matty, Marra, Psymon, Nova and Becks make me feel like such a noob sometimes. And that's such a good thing.
On a roll dude. Writing things like crazy.
You know how sometimes you work really hard, weeks sometimes, to make something good? You redo it again and again to get it just right? Then you post it once you're happy, only to find several other people do the same thing as you way better?
You sir, And Matty, Marra, Psymon, Nova and Becks make me feel like such a noob sometimes. And that's such a good thing.