[IC] Simon Datura - Cmdr's prequel: A Future Torn

lordpsymon · Apr 5, 2016

Hello Cmdrs! o7

I'm writing up a prequel series for my cmdr, detailing his capture and his life as a slave. I'm not sure how many parts it'll be, but I'll keep updating this thread as more chapters are written. I decided to keep it to a single thread so I am not spamming.

Chapter 1: A Seemingly Normal Day
Chapter 2: The Dawn of Hell
Chapter 3: The Moon Job
Chapter 4: The Pit
Chapter 5: The Final Straw
Chapter 6: Escape
Epilogue: Rattlesnake

I hope you enjoy. Let me know what you think.

CMDR M. Lehman · Apr 7, 2016

MOAR. MOAAAAR!

M. Grey · Apr 7, 2016

Was about to write "Nice start..." but being kidnapped into slavery isn't really a "nice start".

DrDevice55 · Apr 7, 2016

im digging this....*bookmarked*

Xeknos · Apr 8, 2016

Well done as always, Psy.

lordpsymon · Apr 9, 2016

Thanks for the responses!

I have added chapter 3.

lordpsymon · Apr 19, 2016

I have now published chapter 4. Perhaps more brutal than I am used to writing.

Marra Morgan · Apr 19, 2016

lordpsymon said:
Perhaps more brutal than I am used to writing.

Given the setting, I wouldn't expect anything less!
Nicely done!

Xeknos · Apr 19, 2016

This turned dark.

lordpsymon · May 14, 2016

Aaaand I am back to writing about slavery. Chapter 5 of this is now up! Hope you like it.

lordpsymon · May 15, 2016

Without further ado, I post chapter 6, bringing this arc almost to an end.

lordpsymon · May 19, 2016

And now I bring this arc of Datura's life to a close with the epilogue!

Xeknos · May 19, 2016

Very well done, Mr. Mon. Have some virtual rep!

Momoka Azuka · May 19, 2016

Gonna have to virtual rep you till I "spread the love" a little more. Well done.