Well, I too visited Sol system. Didn't see double polar vortex on Venus. Didn't see night lights on Earth or any new sci-fi features expected 1000+ years into the future. On a related note: are there city-worlds and colossal orbital factories in Elite universe? Currently it seems rather low tech compared to the likes of Star Wars and Star Trek.
Terraformed Mars is interesting, but again -- no night lights.
I did see a capital ship in Earth orbit. Dramatic music started playing. It was nice. I would suggest a couple of fighter ships to patrol around as well and maybe a little text acknowledging my presence. Another possibility would be to put it near some starport, which would make that starport feel more unique.
A couple of starports have different insides with palms and white walls. I haven't seen this anywhere else. Is this unique to Sol system?
I was expecting Federal Dropship to be sold in this system, but it wasn't.
Overall it was okay. Had some new things for me, but was underwhelming in other regards. It's the capital of Federation. When you go to a major capital, you can find everything there (although very expensive) and it has unique things. Same should apply here, otherwise people's expectations are not met.
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Moons are described along the line of "icy planet". Maybe change that category name to more general "icy world".