Community Event / Creation I've Done it....

psykokow

psykokow
I love calibre too, just double click the book to open it to read..

I also like how easy it is to copy your entire book library in calibre... and keep it safe.
 

Bikky

Bikky
breakpointUK said:
PDF would be awesome! Not really had much experience of Oolite, so I will give it ago after reading your story...
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you ever played elite with a bit of imagination...then that's oolite. Once you've added some packs with extra ships and the big ships oxp and extra mission and the black monks etc.
 

Minti2

Deadly, But very fluffy...
Minti2
WARNING DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU INTEND TO READ BIKKYS STORY AS THERE MAY BE SPOLIERS :)



@Bikky, Am gonna cry! ;).....Just read the whole thing and really enjoyed it! there's a little grammar needs correcting but otherwise very readable and build up was first class.

The main characters were good, and your detailing of the battle scenes excellent, i was gonna just read half then get some lunch, but i wanted to see what happen next, so did and finished now, but am hungry! hehe

i was gonna say i wanted them to live at the end, and find out what the cargo really was, and why the IMP was so keen to destroy everything!

but i guess that what makes the story good, you make the reader question himself and wonder.............Great story! do another! :)
 

Bikky

Bikky
Ahh well, If I ever get around to finishing the "story" that I started with, then you'll find out what the cargo was.

This was something that sort of happened, instead of killing my proper attempt with a sort of flashback memory scene in a drunken stupor type thing.
;)

Thanks for the critique (thought I'd fixed my gud inglish, will have to check it)
 

Minti2

Deadly, But very fluffy...
Minti2
Bikky said:
Ahh well, If I ever get around to finishing the "story" that I started with, then you'll find out what the cargo was.

This was something that sort of happened, instead of killing my proper attempt with a sort of flashback memory scene in a drunken stupor type thing.
;)

Thanks for the critique (thought I'd fixed my gud inglish, will have to check it)
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Ah, i thought that was the way it was gonna end, intresting will look forward to next part if/when you get round to it :)

As for the English, just a few commas needed here and there, otherwise fine, but again just my opinion, and also remember am mildly Dyslexic so am not the best judge! ;)
 

Bikky

Bikky
The Lone Gunman said:
Ah, i thought that was the way it was gonna end, intresting will look forward to next part if/when you get round to it :)

As for the English, just a few commas needed here and there, otherwise fine, but again just my opinion, and also remember am mildly Dyslexic so am not the best judge! ;)
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hehe nice.... I've just read it tonight on my phone and noticed I forgot to put my Italics in for characters thoughts :eek:

oh well
 

Listeri69

Listeri69
Great little story it was a nice read from my hospital bed. Yes there were grammatical errors but you can overlook them as its pace and storyline is of a good quality :) I hope to write something myself in the weeks I'm now layed up :) but great effort you should be proud
 
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