Parks Nene Valley Park

[LoZz]

Nene Vally park

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=973242690

Situation the heart of the Nene valley in the middle of Northamptonshire, this park was built to help stimulate the local economy and help replace future losses in local revenue with Silverstone looking likely to lose the F1 grandprix. This park is meant to challenge the supremacy of Alton Towers and Thorpe park By being the only major theme park in the country not owned by the same parent company.

Come and be thrilled by our great rides and attractions:
RAF Nene Valley, which is proudly sponsored by the M.O.D.
Brawlers, the UK's first roller-coasters to race each other!
The "haunted" wild west
Majestic village
Wood and rock zones.
Watling street (Roman zone coming soon!) #

7 rollercoasters and over 16 other rides and attractions means fun for the whole family! Don't forget your fast-past ticket to beat those ques!


This park is mostly complete with only one area not finished, updates to follow. All you need to do is hire some staff and open it to the world!

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=973242690

 

[Bullethead]

Wow, huge amount of work there I like the story and the overall layout very much.

A bit of constructive criticism, though. The buildings look a bit plain and monochrome. You might want to spiff them up a bit with some decorative strips on the walls, maybe some windowboxes, etc.

 

[Heurtaux]

I agree with Bullethead. It really does seem like a nice park, and it's clear that you've put in a lot of effort.

But to really give it that 'wow-effect' there are still some points of improvement. You have proven to be able to make buildings, but I would like to see you make the step to detail. Try to play a little bit more with the pieces provided. It might not always work out at once, but if you keep experimenting you'll make some great things. I'm sure about that.

One more tip to get you started: try to pay attention to heights. You see the windows on the station building for the log flume on the fifth picture? Your windows are on the same height as the log flume 'track'. Nobody would be able to see a thing through those things. Same on the building on the right (with all the shops) on the last picture. You have the shops on the standard height, but on the side of the building there's a window which is just a feet higher, above the shops there are windows that are another feet higher and above pass through in the middle the windows are another feet higher. Divide a building into storeys and place your windows from there on out.