With the sheer amount of work it will take to repair the damaged stations it might be nice to include a summary at the end of the required materials that tells us how much was delivered to a station recently. Maybe the amounts delivered the last 24 hours, week, etc. This would make it much easier for a random CMDR to make a positive contribution to a station that may have a larger group of players targeting it for repair.
Also, if you want players to repair these stations maybe tell us why we should? Were the Aegis labs at any of these locations working on any project in particular? Would fixing one before another change the story in any particular way? Will the stations simply get destroyed again in a week or two despite months of work to get one back up and running at full capacity, or will Aegis work on a way to block the EMP at the station level this time?
Also, if you want players to repair these stations maybe tell us why we should? Were the Aegis labs at any of these locations working on any project in particular? Would fixing one before another change the story in any particular way? Will the stations simply get destroyed again in a week or two despite months of work to get one back up and running at full capacity, or will Aegis work on a way to block the EMP at the station level this time?