I'll take a stab. I may regret it afterwards. Tyros - and I don't say this to be insulting - but could you perhaps type a little more clearly? Your first post was quite difficult to read.
The Frameshift drive malfunctions... are you sure your ship has enough power? When you upgraded your Frameshift Drive and other components, did you also upgrade the power plant? As others have said, it may also be that you're trying to jump outside of the currently allowed field of play. If you check the Galaxy Map, you should see a 'highlighted' section of the map. These are the stars which we can access, currently - if you're outside of them or are trying to jump to another system outside of them, you're likely to encounter problems.
For myself, I've not once had a FSD malfunction. Neither have I had any issues with cargo jobs disappearing. The only time they have 'disappeared' for me are when the timer on the mission has run out before I handed the job in. Are you sure that's not what is going on?
Trading wise... that's where I've made most of my money (Probably around 20 mil since Beta 3 landed). There are plenty of tools out there like
http://elitetradingtool.co.uk/ and
Slopey's BPC Calculator which make trading a lot easier. As you earn money, upgrade your ship with more cargo space to carry more goods, then upgrade to the next ship, upgrade your bays etc etc... I'm now in an Asp with 192t cargo. The Type 9 is a bit of a jump from there, but I'm looking at chilling out with a souped-up Viper and doing some shooting instead.