Nice start! Couple of long sentences could do with breaking up IMHO, but we got a character, a planet with character, a villain, some nice visual images, a quest!
GRRM has already taken the name King's Landing--unless... spacecraft fighting dragons? A Cobra strafing the undead army?
Can I be the one to blow up Walder Frey's castle? Please? Then I'll ship Stannis' army into the middle of Winterfell using my Clipper and they can deal with the Boltons. Then I'm off to give Dany a lift straight to Westeros...
Sorry I get carried away, especially during server downtime
