Yeah the lighting system still needs work, but then what doesn't?
What'll really grind your gears is seeing a star cast a shadow on an asteroid ring. First time I saw that, I was very confused.
What's wrong with the light ftom a star casting a shadow on a planetary ring or do you mean an asteroid ring around a star?
I've seen brown dwarfs cast a shadow onto asteroid rings from the light of the main star, as though the brown dwarf is not producing any light itself. Now, what would be appropriate, and maybe the effect is too subtle to notice, but the area where the brown dwarf blocks light from the main star should be closer in color to the dwarf itself. The rest of the ring would have a radial gradient of dwarfish (huh?) color on the inside to the brighter color of the main star as you move out (relative to the brightness of the dwarf to the main star).
I've seen brown dwarfs cast a shadow onto asteroid rings from the light of the main star, as though the brown dwarf is not producing any light itself. Now, what would be appropriate, and maybe the effect is too subtle to notice, but the area where the brown dwarf blocks light from the main star should be closer in color to the dwarf itself. The rest of the ring would have a radial gradient of dwarfish (huh?) color on the inside to the brighter color of the main star as you move out (relative to the brightness of the dwarf to the main star).
you are definitely not in shadow of the local planet when in the roids right?