Community Event / Creation Drabble Contest: Signs of Life

Which three (3) Drabbles show any potential signs of life?

  • 01 - Ian Philips - No signs of life

    Votes: 3 16.7%
  • 02 - Frank - Noble Cockroach

    Votes: 3 16.7%
  • 03 - Alien - The Alien Chronicles: Part 6

    Votes: 3 16.7%
  • 04 - Edith_The_Hutt - Operation Colossus

    Votes: 2 11.1%
  • 05 - Darkoba - Parasite Elimination

    Votes: 6 33.3%
  • 06 - moose666 - Simoof's visit to hell

    Votes: 4 22.2%
  • 07 - MrMogadon - The Waiting Room

    Votes: 2 11.1%
  • 08 - cleonymus - Weak Signal Sources

    Votes: 4 22.2%
  • 09 - Missileman - A suspicious life....

    Votes: 3 16.7%
  • 10 - Texas Stu - The Cure?

    Votes: 2 11.1%
  • 11 - Simoof - The all-consuming emptiness - no signs of life

    Votes: 2 11.1%
  • 12 - Splendour - Crawling Home

    Votes: 3 16.7%
  • 13 - DocStone - Part Three - All information has a price

    Votes: 1 5.6%
  • 14 - Sneevus - Lost and Found

    Votes: 9 50.0%
  • 15 - Galactic Midden - Pristine Reserves... But of What?

    Votes: 1 5.6%
  • 16 - Erik Marcaigh - Creatures Great and Small

    Votes: 3 16.7%
  • 17 - Listeri69 - Take yer life and stick it up ya..........

    Votes: 1 5.6%

  • Total voters
    18
  • Poll closed .
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After the long trek to Hutton Orbital, I think we all had to visit the doctor to check our vitals. I know by the seventh day, I wasn't showing many signs of life myself. But that's our topic this week, to discover those Signs of Life that exist ...somewhere... other than here.

Psykokow hosts the Abraka-Drabble live reading show and comedy hour at 7pm BST, Fridays on...
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and will also be uploaded to his You-tube channel & anywhere else he can infect the world with our drabblings!

Remember, the winner(s) of this week's Drabble Contest get to choose next week's topic. They also get to wear the Drabble Crown for a whole week. Sorry it hasn't been to the cleaners since it made it out of Winnard's Hole.

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01 - Ian Philips - No signs of life

The SRV rested, parked on a cliff edge, heat radiating from the engine. Needle hard pinpoints of light pierced the

utter black of the sky, stars unsoftened by atmospheric blurring.

Underneath the SRV the ground, warmed by the engine, began to move, humping itself up attracted by the source of heat.

Once the highest tendril touched the cover, it rapidly spread over the vehicle, absorbing the surface as it went.

In an amazingly short amount of time the engine was compromised. Inside, a warning light flashed, illuminating a life

scanner set to detect Carbon based life.

Silicon life is rare!

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02 - Frank - Noble Cockroach

The scene was desolation, piles of rubble where there used to be houses.

The wind whistles around a small girl as she pokes and tugs at a pile. She starts bawling, holding aloft a dismembered

plastic arm as a sign of her failure to free a doll trapped in the debris.

Adults were too busy to attend to her, scurrying over the rubble and checking their infra-red drones. They turn to

where they hear a yelp of success, and everyone runs there to help.

If it is the aim of the Thargoids to wipe out humanity, they are not succeeding.

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03 - Alien - The Alien Chronicles: Part 6

The Equinox left the planet Eden, and headed for a stricken Cobra MkIII. Captain Ferbus ordered a scan of The Domino as

they approached it. The canopy was iced over.

"There appears to be no signs of life ... wait .. I am picking up a faint remlock signal". Ferbus decided to bring the

Cobra aboard.

As the hatch was cut open with a plasma torch, they found a female pilot in cryo-sleep with a ginger cat.

At that moment, the tactical station asked Ferbus what to do about the planet
"Nuke it from orbit ... it's the only way to be sure."

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04 - Edit_The_Hutt - Operation Colossus

Freelance commanders are the deniable assets of the 34rd century. Not bound by traditional oaths of allegiance they

work as occasional contractors with a security clearance corresponding to a rank in whichever navy is paying.

"Admiral" Turing was no stranger to military dirty work, but this target he would have worked for free. His Asp swooped

low and fast over the rocky terrain, towards the pirate base. Racing through air defenses he released the physics

package. A double-flash behind him confirmed detonation and he yawed round to survey the destruction.

His contract was very clear: Eliminate all signs of life.

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05 - Darkoba - Parasite Elimination

She lay unmoving, slumped over in the pilot's seat.
The noise of the hatch being forced helped her to concentrate. Her heart slowed, her breathing stilled.

The intruder entered the cockpit, glancing at the recumbent pilot.
Seeing no signs of life, he turned his attention to the system status board.

"All secure," he reported, "Head back to base. I'll follow with this ship."

The three pirate ships jumped

He sat in the co-pilot's seat and rebooted systems.
He reached for a switch over the pilot.

She moved. Her knife found its mark.

"One less space-rat" she muttered, setting course home.

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06 - moose666 - Simoof's visit to hell

Simoof exited the elevator, into a corridor made of flame. To his left, was a series of doors

Peeking through the first one. He saw himself being shot by Psykokow with a handheld plasma accelerator , the head of

his simulacrum reduced to a carbon stump.
The next door, he saw himself choking while multiple halon jets discharged from above.
Third door: He was melting into a pool of molten steel.
Before he could proceed, he felt a tingle across his chest, and his vision brightening.
An echoy voice - "We've got life signs!".

And thats when Simoof came back to life.

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07 - MrMogadon - The Waiting Room

The outpost's basement section. A dismal place forgotten and abandoned by all. Almost.

Amidst the detritus, a store-room, scrupulously clean with bright overhead lights shining over a gowned figure.

Also, an operating table. On it, a body, once recognisably human. Once, now no more.

Gutted. Splayed like a lab specimen. Thorax gaping; internal organs, removed: intact, still attached. Still

functioning. Pinned and labelled textbook style. Limbs broken and twisted at obscene angles. The face an abomination:

flayed, peeled and infinitely ruined. Only the eyes remain untouched. In them exist the faintest signs of life. There,

eternity waits for an end.

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08 - cleonymus - Weak Signal Sources

It took two commanders to move the outer door.

They exchanged nervous glances as they brushed aside dust, cobwebs and used fast food cartons.

The light switch was already on, the bulb burned out long ago. Their torches illuminated a grisly scene, as they

carefully picked their way onto the bridge. The smell was overpowering.

A hunched figure sat, slumped in front of a flickering screen. It looked like they were too late. More cobwebs wreathed

the body and hands, seemingly locking the hands in a death grip around the hotas controls.

Then it moved!

“Are you the fuel rats?”

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09 - Missileman - A suspicious life....

I felt around for a pulse, nothing, chances are he'd been dead for weeks, the airless environment preserving the body

despite the working remlock.
it wasn't asphyxiation that had killed him.
I released the straps holding him to the cockpit pilots seat grabbing hold as his body started to float upwards, the

rotation of the craft providing a small centripetal force.
I checked for laser fire, nothing, in fact all my tests came up negative, there wasn't a mark on the body.
It soon became clear what killed him if not how when three ships appeared on my scanner.

Pirates...

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10 - CMDR Texas Stu - The Cure?

The water, so dark blue almost black.
Only a degree above freezing and calm as if a lake not a sea.
The turquoise sloop slid as if it were motionless and the planet moving instead at it's bidding.
No ships but these navigate this part of the world.
Space ships sink on the floes here.
Is the quest almost complete?
Seventy-three stations, 48 worlds led me here to an Elder who holds the secret so many seek?
Flickering glow ahead breaks my concentration.
An ice floe with a lone silhouetted stooped figure.
Does he really have the cure for MODs?

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11 - Simoof - The all-consuming emptiness - no signs of life

One self-blip, lonely on scanner.

Power failing. The ships lights flickering, danced around the softening static hum of the radio. He was aimlessly

drifting in deepspace - days past Hutton now, maybe weeks. The joyful sound of children crying, a long and distant

memory.

Mixing salt-water tears to the ships panel sent an occasional jolt of electricity through his body. He welcomed having

a feeling of any kind.

He slumped back in his chair reminiscing, whispering to himself.
"Tammy sharted" - a small smile cracked onto his sullen face.

Sighing - "Give the people what they want." And thats when Simoof killed Simoof.

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12 - Splendour - Crawling Home

Jan glanced wearily at the clock. Eighteen days and five hours since the incident. She left the controls and opened the

cockpit door, letting in strange noises from the malfunctioning frameshift drive.

At the tiny galley she grabbed a coffee bulb and cranked its temperature right up.

"Show some signs of life! Your watch started half an hour ago!"

Dan continued to sleep like a dead man.

Jan squirted a jet of scalding coffee at an exposed foot.

A yelp, a jerk, the twang of 0g sleeping restraints

Jan grinned and handed the coffee bulb to her bleary eyed copilot.

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13 - DocStone - Part Three - All information has a price.

Her knife once again slid under the skin of Hutton Orbital’s Commander.

“Please, stop, I don’t know where they went” he pleaded.

“Commander, I have no time for this. Tell me where the ship is headed and I will bring an end to this.”

“Please” he sobbed.

She slid her already bloodied fingers into the gap in his skin, gripped the flesh firmly, and pulled down sharply,

ripping another strip of skin from his chest.

He gave a final agonised scream before his weakened heart finally gave in.

She felt for a pulse. No signs of life.

“So, who’s next?”

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14 - Sneevus - Lost and Found

Both engines sounded right this time, red lights started turning green as the window cleared. The frozen hulk was

becoming a ship again.

Nodding as she left the pilot's seat, the suited figure made her way over to the crying coming from the airlock. His

restraints were still secure.

She made the call.

"Yes, sir. The ship is salvageable and cargo intact, just where our information said it would be. Should have her

underway in an hour or so."

The figure paused, listening.

"That's correct, sir. No sign of the pilot." She cycled the airlock and got back to work.

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15 - Galactic Midden - Pristine Reserves... But of What?

They'd named it the Valley of Death as first ship then crew succumbed to the horrors within its depths.

"Anything?", Fillia asked anxiously as Gerauld scanned deep between the rocks. "Shhh" he replied, "there's definitely

more than rocks".

Fans swirled dust about their plastboots as the jury rigged device fought to stay cool. Once a simple prospector drone,

Lil' Bot was now so much more after Gerauld's ingenuous crafting.

Sounds echoed, metal on rock. "It's coming!" screamed Fillia.

As something leapt out Lil' Bot reacted.

Some time later the survivors of Frank's Claim stood embraced, metallic shards floating around them.

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16 - Erik Marcaigh - Creatures Great and Small

The creatures lived in the rock, in their burrow. They emerged only at night due to the star's UV rays.

The ground jolted once, twice. Then again and again. It had a rhythmic beat to it that lasted several minutes, then

stopped.

Huddled together, scared, they eventually took courage and peeked out into a semi-darkness.

"Where are weeessss? Our gardennnn is lossst," said one.

The other crawled out and looked around. The dirt had been replaced with black metal that stretched as far as he could

see. He looked up, and there sat a creature, a thousand times their size.

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17 - Listeri69 - Take yer life and stick it up ya..........

David: and you say you found him like this inside the cargo bay?...was that with or without the Mcstiffy?

Finn: He was quite stiff when we found him..But the McThargoids is his own...

David: well whatever convinced him you could drink it through that hole.

Jack: All tha' kids are doing it

David: And this? Crumbs? Meat? Trumbles? Signs of Loaf right in there.

Finn: Maybe smuggling and all that?... he's coming around...

Richard:....<coming around> You wouldn't dare stick that McStiffy up my rear Jack...

Jack: Fine it was me but I swear the Trumble isn't mine....
 
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Have to say, the quality of the drabbles has been incredible this week. Seems to be backed up by the spread of votes so far! Awesome!
 
Have to say, the quality of the drabbles has been incredible this week. Seems to be backed up by the spread of votes so far! Awesome!

We need more voters though. Get tweeting, facebooking and watercooler gossiping. Please vote, pick your favourite three drabbles and then consider writing your own 100 word story on the topic set on Monday :)
 
I'm finally watching the show.

I was the other one who didn't vote last week. Hmmm... How many different things was I doing for Hutton Orbital Radio CQC and completely forgot about it?!? By the time I got done Twitching Sunday, I realized the voting was all over....

Oh well.

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I picked that pic! And it very clearly says, "signs"!! Y'all can kiss.... it.

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I fell asleep before y'all even got to mine.

I am King of CQC!!! So, who to make my queen??

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OMG, it didn't jolt just 4 times. It jolted again and again (and again, and again, and again...)

The pebble the creatures were living in got stuck in the boot tread of an Elite Dangerous Commander who had landed on a rocky planet once Horizons was finally released! [/EXPLANATION]

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Re: Democracy drabble....

So if a Kingdom is ruled by a king, and an Empire is ruled by an Emperor, and a . . . (etc) . . . , then a Democracy is ruled by a demon!

Well, that explains America's state of affairs.

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Skiprat's final comment! ROFL!!!

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Texas Stu read his own drabble this week. :p That ain't my voice! (I had to go back cuz I slept right through drabbles 7 to 16 before waking up to Winnard's.)
 
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Very very tough time choosing only 3 favorites this week!

Oh, and that was me reading mine, not Erik. And I appreciate that 1 sympathy vote! Carry on :)
 
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Sorry about that error, I hadn't listened to it, and It was clear it was not Erik.. I did mean to speak up about it, however........... the tide of "Teamspeak" washed me out to sea
 
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As you mull over these Drabbles before you, don't forget that high-quality entries are flooding in for the Anonymous Drabble Contest. Well.. when I say "flooding" what I mean is we got one more entry. When I say high quality I do mean high quality. You most excellent contestants can pit your efforts against some top notch competition. And you newcomers to the game. You don't need to reveal the fact that you took part and so if you do badly, no one will ever know.

Here's an appeal to you middling players. We need more Drabbles to pad out the numbers. Just PM them to me. I'm going to enter a Pun Drabble as soon as I can figure out a good pun for the topic of this contest, "Democracy"
 
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As you mull over these Drabbles before you, don't forget that high-quality entries are flooding in for the Anonymous Drabble Contest. Well.. when I say "flooding" what I mean is we got one more entry. When I say high quality I do mean high quality. You most excellent contestants can pit your efforts against some top notch competition. And you newcomers to the game. You don't need to reveal the fact that you took part and so if you do badly, no one will ever know.

Here's an appeal to you middling players. We need more Drabbles to pad out the numbers. Just PM them to me. I'm going to enter a Pun Drabble as soon as I can figure out a good pun for the topic of this contest, "Democracy"
Except that now, you can't do a pun filled drabble in case yours is the only pun filled drabble and we'll all know that that drabble is yours, thus ruining the whole point of the anonymous drabble contest.
 
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Except that now, you can't do a pun filled drabble in case yours is the only pun filled drabble and we'll all know that that drabble is yours, thus ruining the whole point of the anonymous drabble contest.

Or maybe he's deliberately throwing you off as the rules state that the poller can not enter himself because he would know which one is his?
 
Or maybe he's deliberately throwing you off as the rules state that the poller can not enter himself because he would know which one is his?

There's no reason, really, that Frank can't enter a drabble (punny or not). He just can't vote, because he knows who entered what (no pun intended). And if it's a good pun that we can't recognise as such, who'll know? Ah, go on, let Frank have a go!
 
There's no reason, really, that Frank can't enter a drabble (punny or not). He just can't vote, because he knows who entered what (no pun intended). And if it's a good pun that we can't recognise as such, who'll know? Ah, go on, let Frank have a go!

Then he could conduct his own little experiment. Let's say he gets 4 drabblers to actually submit drabbles. He then writes the next 16 and erects the poll. And his chances of winning (again) have greatly increased! ;) lol
 
Here's a pun Frank can use. I found it lying, discarded in the street... I don't understand the title though, "Kraits Felt Jacob's Disease"?

"What's up with dem adders? Moooo" the Lakon on pad 10 said to its neighbour.

"They're 'spinning around' and around coz there's no landing fee, moooo, they're all about the money you see". The massive space bovine chuckled "'It's not about the money, money, money. We don't need your money, money, money', moooo".

"Free docking suits everyone though, it's udderly brilliant. Dem are crazy! And speaking of which they're not the only one. Have you had a check up recently?"

"Woaw! Remember to say 'moooo' pal or nobody will vote for your re-election"

"What re-election!? We're here for scrap collection!"

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Anon
 
Then he could conduct his own little experiment. Let's say he gets 4 drabblers to actually submit drabbles. He then writes the next 16 and erects the poll. And his chances of winning (again) have greatly increased! ;) lol

Are you not aware that Frank is best known for being a paragon of virtue? Not only would he not do such a thing in order to win, I think he also could not be hARasSED to do so.
Hm, it's not a bad idea, though <rapidly scribbles ideas for 10 drabbles>
 
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Here's a pun Frank can use. I found it lying, discarded in the street... I don't understand the title though, "Kraits Felt Jacob's Disease"?

"What's up with dem adders? Moooo" the Lakon on pad 10 said to its neighbour.

"They're 'spinning around' and around coz there's no landing fee, moooo, they're all about the money you see". The massive space bovine chuckled "'It's not about the money, money, money. We don't need your money, money, money', moooo".

"Free docking suits everyone though, it's udderly brilliant. Dem are crazy! And speaking of which they're not the only one. Have you had a check up recently?"

"Woaw! Remember to say 'moooo' pal or nobody will vote for your re-election"

"What re-election!? We're here for scrap collection!"

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Anon

You see how easy it is to write a Drabble in the Style of Frank. You could enter a Drabble that looked like one of mine if you wanted to be guaranteed to lose. I have no qualms in entering a Drabble, but I certainly will not be voting. I'll leave the poll up a few days extra to try to get a few more folks to vote, I'll make it 5 days and standard 3 votes per person.

Everyone has had a fair chance to enter the contest. I'll put up the poll tonight, unless I hear any protests from anyone who is just about to enter. So if you've got a Drabble about "Democracy" and you want to see how it would do in a completely fair and level-playing-field contest then PM it to me today.
 
Are you not aware that Frank is best known for being a paragon of virtue?

I always pictured him more as the toilet of virtue. But, eh. :)

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You see how easy it is to write a Drabble in the Style of Frank. You could enter a Drabble that looked like one of mine if you wanted to be guaranteed to lose. I have no qualms in entering a Drabble, but I certainly will not be voting. I'll leave the poll up a few days extra to try to get a few more folks to vote, I'll make it 5 days and standard 3 votes per person.

Yeah, and a dumb American could even spell a word the "Proper English" way and y'all would figure, "That ain't Erik's." :D
 
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