Hello.
Here's something that I threw together. Haven't done any creative writing since college but love elite and how open it is for those who play it. So I thought why not.
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I was actually shaking with anticipation! I hadn't slept at all last night waiting for this moment. My stomach hurt, was I going to throw up? No, it’s just nerves. My knees felt like they were going to collapse at any second. But to any onlooker passing by, I was completely still. Just some young kid staring at the bay door to the launch hanger. Oh God, maybe I was going to throw up! The retrieval drone seemed to take forever to get the launch hangar. All my senses were overreacting. The smell of hydrogen fuel filled my nose like I was actually sitting in a fuel tank. Any noise sounded like an explosion. My new clothes felt hot and suddenly very confining. My mouth tasted dry like old synth leather. The old flight duffel I had weighed a ton, the strap burned into my hand and shoulder. I was so nervous.
I found myself randomly looking around the launch hanger, Trevithick Dock was all I knew. I’ve never left the station before, being an orphan and apprenticed to a tailor really didn’t require the need for off station travel. Being this early in the morning it really wasn’t too busy in the hanger, not much was going on. A few ships here and there with the usual cargo transfers and repairs going on. A few pilots but mainly just dock workers. No one seemed to be paying me much attention. That I was glad for.
I absently scratched my chin thinking of what my old master Mr. Ghaw, was doing right now. He was probably organizing his shop like he did every morning before opening. He was such a creature of habit. He had said his goodbyes last night and went to bed at his usual time. He didn’t try to talk me out of leaving, both him and his wife just said be careful and visit whenever I came back into the system. I would miss them both but I never really felt that close to them.
My apprenticeship under his teachings was rather boring. He and his wife were both very reserved and quiet for the most part. Always just listening and silently nodding when engaged in any conversation, never really showing any emotions. I knew he wasn’t happy with my leaving, he never openly said it but the way he would set his mouth into a stern frown told me otherwise. Maybe it was because they didn’t have any kids and wanted me take over the shop one day. I really didn’t care for the tailor business but I did my job dutifully and with respect. I felt obligated to him, he didn’t have to take me in as an apprentice but he did. I’ve heard horror stories from other kids growing up and how they were treated, so I considered myself very lucky. But on my off time, I always seemed to end up at the docks or wherever commanders hung out. Their stories and goings-on always fascinated me, and created a yearning in me to go into the black and create my own destiny.
Also apprenticing as a tailor had its perks and helped in this matter. Most of the commanders that came in always had questions or just talked away insensibly, often letting slip juicy little secrets that could come in handy at times. I took many an odd job because of these rambling pilots. Cleaning ships, helping with repairs or running station errands on my off time. It was all fun for me and helped fuel my thirst for anything commander related. It also helped build business for Mr. Ghaw. A lot of pilots would stop into the shop first before even going to the bar, sometimes just to find me to run errands that needed to be done. I was able to acquire quite a small fortune this way to help further my dreams of being a commander. If it wasn’t for this, I never would have become a commander with my own ship.
0855, showed my coms pad strapped to my right forearm as I looked at it. Damn, still too early I groaned to myself, I impatiently shook my arm trying to get the clock to speed up somehow. I had ordered the towing bot to retrieve the ship from the longer term storage hangar as soon as I heard I could get the ship. I had to wait till 0900 the next day. Damn automated retrieval drones, no hurry to their programming. Even talking to the hangar master didn't speed up the process, he just chucked and said I had to wait my turn. This is taking forever...
Ping Ding, my coms pad went off. I quickly glanced down again at it strapped to my wrist. New message. I pressed the screen and the message popped open. Delivery of vessel to launch pad 5, eta 10 min. “Finally” I grumbled out loud. Just a few minutes longer.
After what seemed like a small eternity, the bay doors to the storage hanger started to open. The flashing lights and the audible alarm on the door made my heart beat even faster. The retrieval drones’ lights were so bright I couldn't see the ship at first but it was slowly coming into view. And there it was my new ship, a SideWinder. I wanted to run to my launch pad to beat the drone there but I wanted to play it cool. I didn't want the other pilots in the launch hangar to see my excitement and laugh at me.
I sauntered my way over to the maintenance terminal trying to act like I've done this a million times before. I quickly glanced around the launch bay to see if anyone was watching me, nothing, everyone else was in their own little world. The maintenance terminal screen was still dark, I touched it to activate it but nothing happened. What, I thought to myself as I started to panic, why is this not working, as I started to press harder and harder to get the thing to activate. Nothing was working, NO, NO, NO, I screamed in my head as I got more frustrated by the second. Suddenly the screen flickered on, startled I pulled my hand away. Commander Wolfe3 press for message, the screen said, atop an overlay of a simple SideWinder schematic with a quick reference printout of the ship diagnostics. During my argument with the terminal I didn't notice the retrieval drone set the ship into place and detach itself.
I pressed the message block. Welcome Commander Wolfe3, it read, please confirm payment of 100 credits for the towing fee. Press confirm below to make payment. I overzealously pressed the payment button. Thank you, it responded. Ship now released to owner Commander Wolfe3. Remember to follow all station regulations when exiting the launch bay, Have a nice day. The screen flickered back to the main diagnostic screen. Fuel tank full, Ammo, none needed, Damage, none all systems 100%. This is it, I thought to myself as I slowly looked up.
So there I was, just standing there, looking at my new ship, an old but trusty SideWinder. She wasn't fancy, hell, she was older than anything I’ve ever seen before. She probably was the first sidewinder to be retrofitted with the new Frame Shift Drive, I grinned to myself. She was covered in a ton of dust but no visible damage that I could see. She was still dark, power wasn't turned on, but the access hatch was unlocked for manual access.
I don’t know how long I just stood there starring at my new ship, taking in every line, panel joint, landing gear strut, just basking in the newness of what I had just acquired.
“Ahem” a voice coughed behind me. I turned around to see a hanger maintenance worker grinning at me like an idiot. “You’re first ship huh?” said the grease covered man as he pointed at my ship.
“Yeah,” I said smiling, I couldn't help it I was so excited. “How could you tell?” I asked him back as I sheepishly shrugged my shoulders and hung my head down.
“Ah, don’t worry about it kid,” he said as he jokingly punched my arm. “I've seen a lot of new pilots in my time and you definitely have that new pilot, I'm lost look” He started to laugh at me. “Fly safe kid, Fly safe” was the last thing he said as he turned and walked away. I just shook my head at the old man and tuned back to my ship. Here we go, I thought as I stood up straight and started to walk to that way.
I started to make my way to the nose of the ship, I continued to look at her lines and admire her for what she was, my own spaceship. As I got to the ship, I stretched my hand out to touch her, feeling the cool metal for the first time, a sudden shiver shook my whole body. Wow I can’t believe I'm doing this, I thought to myself. I continued to drag my fingers down the whole length of the SideWinder, feeling every bump, panel seam, and rivet dimple as I made my way to the access hatch. Once there I grabbed the simple round indented handle and gave it a turn to the left, a large clunk sound confirmed that the dead bolts had retracted and the hatch swung open with ease. I was instantly greeted but the smell of un-circulated stale air from inside the ship. I looked into the dark interior took a deep breath and started to climb in.
Here's something that I threw together. Haven't done any creative writing since college but love elite and how open it is for those who play it. So I thought why not.
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I was actually shaking with anticipation! I hadn't slept at all last night waiting for this moment. My stomach hurt, was I going to throw up? No, it’s just nerves. My knees felt like they were going to collapse at any second. But to any onlooker passing by, I was completely still. Just some young kid staring at the bay door to the launch hanger. Oh God, maybe I was going to throw up! The retrieval drone seemed to take forever to get the launch hangar. All my senses were overreacting. The smell of hydrogen fuel filled my nose like I was actually sitting in a fuel tank. Any noise sounded like an explosion. My new clothes felt hot and suddenly very confining. My mouth tasted dry like old synth leather. The old flight duffel I had weighed a ton, the strap burned into my hand and shoulder. I was so nervous.
I found myself randomly looking around the launch hanger, Trevithick Dock was all I knew. I’ve never left the station before, being an orphan and apprenticed to a tailor really didn’t require the need for off station travel. Being this early in the morning it really wasn’t too busy in the hanger, not much was going on. A few ships here and there with the usual cargo transfers and repairs going on. A few pilots but mainly just dock workers. No one seemed to be paying me much attention. That I was glad for.
I absently scratched my chin thinking of what my old master Mr. Ghaw, was doing right now. He was probably organizing his shop like he did every morning before opening. He was such a creature of habit. He had said his goodbyes last night and went to bed at his usual time. He didn’t try to talk me out of leaving, both him and his wife just said be careful and visit whenever I came back into the system. I would miss them both but I never really felt that close to them.
My apprenticeship under his teachings was rather boring. He and his wife were both very reserved and quiet for the most part. Always just listening and silently nodding when engaged in any conversation, never really showing any emotions. I knew he wasn’t happy with my leaving, he never openly said it but the way he would set his mouth into a stern frown told me otherwise. Maybe it was because they didn’t have any kids and wanted me take over the shop one day. I really didn’t care for the tailor business but I did my job dutifully and with respect. I felt obligated to him, he didn’t have to take me in as an apprentice but he did. I’ve heard horror stories from other kids growing up and how they were treated, so I considered myself very lucky. But on my off time, I always seemed to end up at the docks or wherever commanders hung out. Their stories and goings-on always fascinated me, and created a yearning in me to go into the black and create my own destiny.
Also apprenticing as a tailor had its perks and helped in this matter. Most of the commanders that came in always had questions or just talked away insensibly, often letting slip juicy little secrets that could come in handy at times. I took many an odd job because of these rambling pilots. Cleaning ships, helping with repairs or running station errands on my off time. It was all fun for me and helped fuel my thirst for anything commander related. It also helped build business for Mr. Ghaw. A lot of pilots would stop into the shop first before even going to the bar, sometimes just to find me to run errands that needed to be done. I was able to acquire quite a small fortune this way to help further my dreams of being a commander. If it wasn’t for this, I never would have become a commander with my own ship.
0855, showed my coms pad strapped to my right forearm as I looked at it. Damn, still too early I groaned to myself, I impatiently shook my arm trying to get the clock to speed up somehow. I had ordered the towing bot to retrieve the ship from the longer term storage hangar as soon as I heard I could get the ship. I had to wait till 0900 the next day. Damn automated retrieval drones, no hurry to their programming. Even talking to the hangar master didn't speed up the process, he just chucked and said I had to wait my turn. This is taking forever...
Ping Ding, my coms pad went off. I quickly glanced down again at it strapped to my wrist. New message. I pressed the screen and the message popped open. Delivery of vessel to launch pad 5, eta 10 min. “Finally” I grumbled out loud. Just a few minutes longer.
After what seemed like a small eternity, the bay doors to the storage hanger started to open. The flashing lights and the audible alarm on the door made my heart beat even faster. The retrieval drones’ lights were so bright I couldn't see the ship at first but it was slowly coming into view. And there it was my new ship, a SideWinder. I wanted to run to my launch pad to beat the drone there but I wanted to play it cool. I didn't want the other pilots in the launch hangar to see my excitement and laugh at me.
I sauntered my way over to the maintenance terminal trying to act like I've done this a million times before. I quickly glanced around the launch bay to see if anyone was watching me, nothing, everyone else was in their own little world. The maintenance terminal screen was still dark, I touched it to activate it but nothing happened. What, I thought to myself as I started to panic, why is this not working, as I started to press harder and harder to get the thing to activate. Nothing was working, NO, NO, NO, I screamed in my head as I got more frustrated by the second. Suddenly the screen flickered on, startled I pulled my hand away. Commander Wolfe3 press for message, the screen said, atop an overlay of a simple SideWinder schematic with a quick reference printout of the ship diagnostics. During my argument with the terminal I didn't notice the retrieval drone set the ship into place and detach itself.
I pressed the message block. Welcome Commander Wolfe3, it read, please confirm payment of 100 credits for the towing fee. Press confirm below to make payment. I overzealously pressed the payment button. Thank you, it responded. Ship now released to owner Commander Wolfe3. Remember to follow all station regulations when exiting the launch bay, Have a nice day. The screen flickered back to the main diagnostic screen. Fuel tank full, Ammo, none needed, Damage, none all systems 100%. This is it, I thought to myself as I slowly looked up.
So there I was, just standing there, looking at my new ship, an old but trusty SideWinder. She wasn't fancy, hell, she was older than anything I’ve ever seen before. She probably was the first sidewinder to be retrofitted with the new Frame Shift Drive, I grinned to myself. She was covered in a ton of dust but no visible damage that I could see. She was still dark, power wasn't turned on, but the access hatch was unlocked for manual access.
I don’t know how long I just stood there starring at my new ship, taking in every line, panel joint, landing gear strut, just basking in the newness of what I had just acquired.
“Ahem” a voice coughed behind me. I turned around to see a hanger maintenance worker grinning at me like an idiot. “You’re first ship huh?” said the grease covered man as he pointed at my ship.
“Yeah,” I said smiling, I couldn't help it I was so excited. “How could you tell?” I asked him back as I sheepishly shrugged my shoulders and hung my head down.
“Ah, don’t worry about it kid,” he said as he jokingly punched my arm. “I've seen a lot of new pilots in my time and you definitely have that new pilot, I'm lost look” He started to laugh at me. “Fly safe kid, Fly safe” was the last thing he said as he turned and walked away. I just shook my head at the old man and tuned back to my ship. Here we go, I thought as I stood up straight and started to walk to that way.
I started to make my way to the nose of the ship, I continued to look at her lines and admire her for what she was, my own spaceship. As I got to the ship, I stretched my hand out to touch her, feeling the cool metal for the first time, a sudden shiver shook my whole body. Wow I can’t believe I'm doing this, I thought to myself. I continued to drag my fingers down the whole length of the SideWinder, feeling every bump, panel seam, and rivet dimple as I made my way to the access hatch. Once there I grabbed the simple round indented handle and gave it a turn to the left, a large clunk sound confirmed that the dead bolts had retracted and the hatch swung open with ease. I was instantly greeted but the smell of un-circulated stale air from inside the ship. I looked into the dark interior took a deep breath and started to climb in.
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