Hello all.
I have taken many criticisms about the WAY I wrote this OP into consideration. I fully understand it's a long read, and even put a disclaimer in the OP about this. I do not expect you to read it if you do not want to. Generic TL;DR comments aren't exactly helpful. However, a few of you have honestly made some good points about how it could be better formatted or written, and I will be editing it to include such suggestions. These are valid criticisms, as a good argument can be undermined by bad writing, and even those who agree with me on a lot of points seem to think it could have been better made.
Firstly, a few of you have suggested that I add a table of contents. This makes good sense, and I will be adding one. The OP is essentially about 2 dozen topics, all of which could have INDIVIDUALLY been made into their own threads, so having this would better allow people to skip to the parts they are most interested in, and at least read those, even if they aren't interested in reading its entirety.
Secondly, some have requested better formatting such as titles... I HAVE included a format, with titles and bullet points. However, this is still a valid criticism, as these do not pop out. One would still have to read the OP in its entirety to even notice such titles. As such, I will play around with the formatting options this forum provides to make them easier to spot.
Thirdly... the story about the Beluga was clearly a horrible idea. I know how it comes off, and even stated in the OP that I'm fully aware these were my own stupid mistakes. However, since it is the FIRST thing people read in this OP, for those who aren't willing to read it's entirety, especially based on how the first 10% reads, then it is fully understandable a significant number of posters would simply assume it's a rebuy rant... My original intention with making it the introduction was to give people context for my frustration prior to my suggestions, and honestly, for comedic effect... It is a very silly situation, as one reply stated, "like watching scientists be idiots in horror movies". However, it seems this entire idea has utterly backfired, as people seem to think the "don't buy if you can't afford rebuy" point isn't already well apparent to me.
I should not have put my proper argument behind this rant, as it makes it more inaccessible to people. Thus, I will remove it from the OP entirely, and give only a very short summary of it in the "Ship Recovery" portion of my critique, near the very bottom. I may decide to quote it in a reply, for those who want the context of the previous 8 pages of replies.
Doing this should help people to more quickly get into the meat of the critiques and suggestions, which is the better part of the OP.
Furthermore, I plan on adding a few things here and there that I forgot to mention that would have already addressed some of the replies I've recieved. However, that's for new readers. For brevity's sakes, I will reply to people who made such replies individually, so as not to waste their time with a partly rewritten OP.
I honestly think the Elite Dangerous game for you, your passion, your interest is this forum and writing, editing, maintaining and formatting mega posts.
You know the forum is free and the game cost you money. So in hindsight you might have saved yourself some money.
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