Nice! I learned some things, e.g. I always suspected that shields were stronger with more pips, but it's nice to see that confirmed. I was also unsure how the signature bar worked.
I was wondering what the carets over stars mean in the Galaxy Map, so maybe include that.
And under speed indicator on p. 9, is it possible to tell us what the number means? Is the number m/s or some other real world number?
I only skimmed, but I'll add a few more typos:
p. 7 Under Ful Gauges: "Your ships fuel" apostrophe missing.
p. 8 Under Ship Schematic: "shields strength" should be "shield strength" (since this is used elsewhere).
p. 9 Under Hull Integrity: intergrity
p. 14 Under Transactions: first word not capitalized
p. 21 Crime: Closing citation mark missing for WANTED.
EDIT:
The scanner also scans stellar and planetary bodies in Super Cruise. Maybe include that on p. 16? Even better, write a paragraph or two on exploration.
It would also be nice to see a page on various equipment, e.g. fuel scoops, chaff launchers, weapon types, etc. You should let people know somewhere which stars can be used for scooping and which cannot.
EDIT 2:
The online FAQ (also very nice) points to the game manual for details on interdiction. I saw no such details in manual:
http://www.elitedangerous.com/faqs