Independent Pilots Liberate Gilya
This has been published in Gilya.
Independent Pilots Liberate Gilya
Pilots Federation Criticized
This has been published in Gilya.
This has been published in Mingh.
Workers of Mingh Green Party Assume Control of Mining Camp
Buckyball Racing Club to provide tyre track research data
I assume ‘Total Recall’ is an SRV-racing event? Because by focusing mostly on the ‘tyre recall’ conceit, I think the nature of the event isn’t perhaps as clear as it might have been. My advice would be to revise the opening so readers who are unfamiliar with the BRC will know what the event is about. If I’m wrong, and the event isn’t an SRV race, then do of course ignore this advice!
I've tweaked the wording
Looks good! I'm glad my advice was useful. Your submission will be published today.
DATE: For Immediate Publication
LOCATION: GalNet, or Achenar, Sol, and Maia
TITLE: Frustrated Starport Officials Lambaste Ishmael Palin
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Lol yeah quite a few people are worried about this
Myself, I plan to continue harvesting after the CG and feed our very own Bond Hub and Ackerman in Eravate
Frustrated Starport Officials Lambaste Ishmael Palin
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