Hm.... a piece of advice for the technical makeup of the Video :
- pop-ups of "User XYZ is now following" using weirdo animations with live "Thank you for contributing to my revenue stream" comments -> Don't. Ever. It's super lame, awkward and makes you look like you're working to get the "Infuenza disease".
- putting yourself into the Stream -> Sometimes a clear voice (which you have and which is recognizable) is simpler and better. Sometimes less is more.
- overall, anything that sounds like "Please follow and subscribe" -> avoid like the pest, it literally makes people press the "Stop Replay" button
The only thing that was missing were sparkles, donation whoopies, hearts and other weird stuff floating around the screen.
Overall due to the factors above : 0 out of 10, wouldn't follow/subscribe/watch
Explanation : there's just
so many click who(wait, can't write that) on the web using those super weird stream/follower/subscriber mechanics and associated visuals... don't try to be like them. Try to be as different from them as you can make it happen.
That's my 2 cents more or less.
From the looks of it, I wasn't the only one thoroughly put off by the demonstrated "stream mechanics". I've got no idea why these have become so popular, they're absolutely horrid, sufficiently horrid to totally distract from the delivered content IMHO.