Look good, basically an explorer build
Personally, I'd got for:
- max jump potential = use the pre-engineered 5A FSD (add mass manager experimental)
- better boost interval (currently 11 seconds) = 3A PD with charge enhanced/super conduits
- more speed = dirty drag those drives
- more efficient PP = G2-3 OC/thermal spread (put your SRV on priority 5, FSD booster/scoop on 4, etc)
- save some G5 mats = life support and sensors to G3 only (not a big difference in total weight)
- some dumbfire missiles for ground assault = 1 or 2 size 1 Advanced Missile Racks (not available on Coriolis for some reason), lightweight if you want to maintain jump range
All those changes will still get you over 71ly laden jump range, and you'll be faster and run cooler.