Community Event / Creation Drabble Contest #114 - We Interrupt this Broadcast, and Static
- Thread starter Frank
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Its beautiful. Only one thing. The word static at the end does not seem to fit really into the flow. I feels sort of contrived and bolted on as if it forced upon you to include it. Sorry, but the rest is great.Sob sob sob, my cat died.
Sob sob sob,
Feel sorry for me, sob sob.
Sob sob sob. Sob sob.
Cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Sob sob sob,
You feeling emotional yet?
Sob sob sob, he was my cat and he’s now dead.
I hope you vote for me, I’m all emosh and stuff.
Sob sob, cry cry, sob sob.
Feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels.
Sob sob sob.
I can’t think of a good drabble this week,
I am so upset.
Sob sob sob, it’s because I am a rubbish writer.
Please vote for me out of pity and sadness.
Sob sob sob.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Sob sob sob.
Static.
Saying nothing more
Let me fix it for you ...
Sob sob sob, my cat died.
Sob sob sob,
Feel sorry for me, sob sob.
Sob sob sob. Sob sob.
Cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Sob sob sob,
You feeling emotional yet?
Sob sob sob, he was my cat and he’s now dead.
I hope you vote for me, I’m all emosh and stuff.
Sob sob, cry cry, sob sob.
Feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeels.
Sob sob sob.
I can’t think of a good drabble this week,
I am so upset.
Sob sob sob, it’s because I am a rubbish writer.
Please vote for me out of pity and sadness.
Sob sob sob.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!
Sob sob sob.
And that's when they killed Simoof.
Saying nothing more
If you can give rep, why cant you take it away too?
Now I gotta get enough rep handed out to +Rep you again, Alien.
In my desperation, I accidentally repped Simoof.
I am ashamed.
Congratulations Kow! May your choice be wise to reveal your surprise that the new topic this week will make us all squeeeak!
I would like to congratulate me on being the real winner this week......
Well done Kow
I think we were ALL winners this week, Doc. We all made it through another Drabble week and everyone got at least one vote.
I think we were ALL winners this week, Doc. We all made it through another Drabble week and everyone got at least one vote.
Very true. I got a really warm fuzzy feeling when I realised we'd all received at least one vote. I thought, that's lovely, no one's really a loser then
I think we were ALL winners this week, Doc. We all made it through another Drabble week and everyone got at least one vote.
I am so tempted to say something ... but it's funnier not toVery true. I got a really warm fuzzy feeling when I realised we'd all received at least one vote. I thought, that's lovely, no one's really a loser then
Lol, that's hilarious! Let's see who last edited it...
Nope, no edits. I guess it's correct, you must've dreamed those last 37 words, unless you're accusing Frank the Great of some jiggery-pokery??
Nope, no edits. I guess it's correct, you must've dreamed those last 37 words, unless you're accusing Frank the Great of some jiggery-pokery??