Soontill Relics, the Regor Permit Sector and DB's cryptic hints....

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A quick stab at a GalNet article. Do we want to say anything else or hint at anything else? Do we continue with the He Bo cover and mention that here?

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Thanks to an unprecidented co-ordinated search invloved dozens of commanders, Dr. Arcanonn and his team are delighted to have recovered an Unknown Artifact. They are currently testing and analysing the mysterious object in an undisclosed laboratory.

They wish to extend a warning to all commanders should they encounter on of these object - the artifact of unknown origin emits strange radiation that will severely damage the systems of any ship carrying the object.

Fly Safe Commanders.

Looks good to me but mention Wizzard ;),
 
A quick stab at a GalNet article. Do we want to say anything else or hint at anything else? Do we continue with the He Bo cover and mention that here?

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Thanks to an unprecidented co-ordinated search invloved dozens of commanders, Dr. Arcanonn and his team are delighted to have recovered an unknown Artifact. They are currently testing and analysing the mysterious object in an undisclosed laboratory.

They wish to extend a warning to all commanders should they encounter on of these object - the artifact of unknown origin emits strange radiation that will severely damage the systems of any ship carrying the object.

Fly Safe Commanders.
Artefact... not Artifact... if you want to be an editor...... :p :p ;)
Anyway Artefact is wrong....
 
A quick stab at a GalNet article. Do we want to say anything else or hint at anything else? Do we continue with the He Bo cover and mention that here?

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Thanks to an unprecidented co-ordinated search invloved dozens of commanders, Dr. Arcanonn and his team are delighted to have recovered an unknown Artifact. They are currently testing and analysing the mysterious object in an undisclosed laboratory.

They wish to extend a warning to all commanders should they encounter on of these object - the artifact of unknown origin emits strange radiation that will severely damage the systems of any ship carrying the object.

Fly Safe Commanders.

By "recovered" do you mean "stolen" from someone else who had "recovered" it? :)

Well done! Now, where's Redeye?
 
Thanks to an unprecedented co-ordinated search involving dozens of commanders across many systems, Dr. Arcanonn and his team are delighted to have recovered an Unknown Artefact. The item was recovered by CMDR Red Wizzard who demonstrated outstanding initiative, bravery and skill. The team are currently testing and analysing the mysterious object in an undisclosed laboratory.

CMDR Arcanonn wishes to extend a warning to all commanders should they encounter one of these objects - these artefacts of unknown origin emit strange radiation that will severely damage the systems of any ship carrying the object.

Fly Safe Commanders.
 
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Thanks to an unprecidented co-ordinated search involving dozens of commanders across many systems, Dr. Arcanonn and his team are delighted to have recovered an Unknown Artifact. The item was recovered by a CMDR Red Wizzard who demonstrated outstanding initiative, bravery and skill. The team are currently testing and analysing the mysterious object in an undisclosed laboratory.

CMDR Arcanonn wishes to extend a warning to all commanders should they encounter one of these objects - these artifacts of unknown origin emit strange radiation that will severely damage the systems of any ship carrying the object.

Fly Safe Commanders.

I like it, but I wouldn't say "by a CMDR Red Wizzard" .. just "by CMDR Red Wizzard"
 
Thanks to an unprecidented co-ordinated search involving dozens of commanders across many systems, Dr. Arcanonn and his team are delighted to have recovered an Unknown Artifact. The item was recovered by a CMDR Red Wizzard who demonstrated outstanding initiative, bravery and skill. The team are currently testing and analysing the mysterious object in an undisclosed laboratory.

CMDR Arcanonn wishes to extend a warning to all commanders should they encounter one of these objects - these artifacts of unknown origin emit strange radiation that will severely damage the systems of any ship carrying the object.

Fly Safe Commanders.

Haha good stuff they will tweak it anyway go for it
 
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