I agree, but I was thinking of the average beginner when I wrote that sentence. That said, it might be just simpler for me to remove that line! Thanks for the feedbackExcellent work - clear, well-organised and thorough. It's well-written too - easy to follow without being intimidating.
If I may offer some light criticism, I'd take issue with the claim in chapter 17 that it's very difficult for a single CMDR to influence the BGS. It's actually very easy for a single CMDR to influence the BGS; they just need to know what they're doing in each particular circumstance according to their goals. I mean, sure, good luck flipping Sol, but most systems don't see anything like that level of random traffic.