Great work! Amazing actually, for what it had to cover.
Have another misspelling I don't think has been mentioned. On page 14, the HUD diagram, you have "Canon" on the reticle display, when it should be "Cannon".
Very nice, I actually learned a couple of things!
For some reason if you download the text version from scribd it has loads of spelling mistakes such as 'frst' instead of 'first'. Weird. PDF is fine.
All instructions I've checked has one huge mistake: they do not list default buttons for various functions so I have to switch constantly between game and instruction to find out what is the button for vertical strafe, yaw, horizontal strafe, boost, retract landing gear, etc. etc. etc.?
All instructions I've checked has one huge mistake: they do not list default buttons for various functions so I have to switch constantly between game and instruction to find out what is the button for vertical strafe, yaw, horizontal strafe, boost, retract landing gear, etc. etc. etc.?
STEP 4: ENTERING STATION ON THE RIGHT SIDE
When entering station try to keep closer to GREEN lights – that is the right way
Excellent work, another rep will be coming from me.
One small point:
STEP 4: ENTERING STATION ON THE RIGHT SIDE
That is down to interpretation rather than any rules. Pretty certain NPCs don't follow that.
interesting! I will definitely look at this.
Already 1 tip, give the PDF filename also a version number so it's clear when someone downloads it if he's downloading a newer version or not.
ah yes. good point. keep it like it is thenif i do that then i cannot keep the same download/view link and anyone who shared links will have to "re"share them with each update, in other words it will be a mess
the version number is on page 2 big enough or anyone to see (scribd) and mediafire has "file size" and "uploaded" fields right right below the file name, those indications should be more than enough.