If I leave my PC on and the room lights are off then I can still see reasonably well throughout the room, nowhere is completely black. Plus don't forget you are only seeing the lights in front of you here, there are also a lot of lights to either side of you as well as above and behind you that are throwing light around the cockpit. The cockpit should be very well illuminated and none of the struts or dash should be completely black.Well, how light works is complex. I mean if you leave your PC on at night those LEDs don't light up all that much around it. Indeed just a very small area is lit up blue, for instance. It cuts out suddenly on that cockpit say on the bottom strut lights because there is a raised section just above.
An issue here is it's not entirely clear what is supposed to be the light itself. It appears to be emitting from a magic point source roughly aligned with those triple thin lines. Also the lighter grey part of the outside is light up more than the much darker raised bit inside.
As far as the status panels go, are they supposed to be projected on your helmet (so it shouldn't act as a light source) or actually on the dashboard itself?
Lights, especially pin ones, don't really throw all that much light around them at all, and not even getting in to how the bumpiness of the cockpit itself blocks light.
To my eyes that edited image you created does in fact look like someone's switched the roof lamps on.
I do agree that some of the light sources are not clear but that's another issue.
The status panels are holopanels on the ship dashboard not on your helmet.