Well, you sound like you know what you want and are happy with your loadout so I wish you a bon voyage; may you find all sorts of wonderful stuffs on your journey.
Obviously, there are tweaks you could make so if you have any "would you like to know more?" questions, don't hesitate to ask.
I'm now en route back to civilisation - approximately half way. I was hoping to find a great mining ring but found zero metallics.
Overall, it was a pretty average jaunt. Got some first discos - including just one ammonia (terraformable) - but not very many. A few first footfalls. One or two exo codex entries. All in all, a little bit... meh.
So...
I think I'll do a few more on foot missions. Then I'll mine some platinum to fund some tritium purchase - need loads and carrying a full T9 back and forth from a station is quite laborious.
Y'know, there's two QOL things right there that could be implemented. Firstly, a petrol station-like platform that your carrier can sort of dock with that pumps tritium into your coffers. Secondly, and I think I've bleated about this before

, getting some tubing on the FC that facilitates pumping tritium from your hold to your depot instead of holding your finger down for ages in the transfer screen then donating it from your ship. I suppose this would have to be an owner only option...