Rohini: contrary to the entry, the station now has a shipyard. (Not sure when exactly it was added.)
Near and Far 3kpc Arm, Galactic Bar (Region): all three entries say route plotting is difficult in the core, but that's no longer the case.
The Abyss (Region): "interam" -> "interarm"
The Perseus Fade (Region): "Region" -> "A region", "but for few hundred" -> "but for a few hundred"
Centaurus Reach (Region): "lenght" -> "length", "centaurus" -> "Centaurus", "august 3301" -> "August 3301"
Styx (Region): "and do the crossing" -> "and crossing"
Metztli : "Nerus" -> "Nereus"
From Routes:
The Daedalus Mission:
"Rifts" -> "Rift's", "Hypoina" -> "Hyponia", "Wings' -> "wing's", "fate of Daedalus" -> "fate of the Daedalus"
Crab Nebula Expedition route: there's no text at all
Rock Rat Run: "I" is incorrectly capitalised as "i" several times
Jmanis Bridge: named after the Commander who first submitted it, but back when I submitted mine, I was told this isn't allowed. Let me know if this has changed since. (Not that I'd like mine to be renamed, mind.)
Posiedal Wall: should be "Poseidal". Also, you might want to remove the " Please let me know if you think this is wrong, and I will change it." line from the entry
Also, shouldn't more Major Expeditions be added?
Then some from the
Star clusters category:
The Remembrance:
"A globular cluster of 12 Class-O stars. Close-spacing. Each one is approx 40LY apart." -> "A globular cluster of twelve class O stars, closely spaced. Each one is approximately 40 ly apart."
NGC 3603:
" Early earth scientists" -> "Scientists from the 19th century"
Seven Sapphires Cluster:
" B0 VZ*" -> "B0 VZ", "Cluster" -> "cluster"
The PW2010 Supercluster:
"aurrounding" -> "surrounding"
Skull and Crossbones nebula:
"There are few black holes" -> "There are a few black holes"
The Pomegranate nebula:
"At 120110125LY in size " -> "At 120 x 110 x 125 ly in size"
Also, one from pulsars:
The Black Widow Pulsar: " the pulsar was estimated to move across the galactic plane at a speed of appr. one million miles per hour, which would be more than 20 times the speed of Sol " - I'm fairly certain mph isn't used anywhere in astronomy. I don't know what speeds are used for measuring star movements in the galaxy, but perhaps it would be best to change it to "at a speed of approximately twenty times that of Sol"?